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©2007-2009 ~Artaholicfury
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Just some random work on preportions. Please critique

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:iconmdetector5:
This is a good pose, nice work, and um... as for critique, the face needs more work, as in overall shape...
:iconsilverleprichuan:
I think the abs look wonderful

breasts could use a bit more attention the cleavage is off

the hips could blend into the thighs more smoothly.


overall I think it's a really nice picture that would look more realistic with a few minor alterations.

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Thanks ^^

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I wanted to kill the sexiest person alive...But suicide's a crime :-/
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I might take some more time to redo this pic. I didnt work too much on the face as much as I should have =] thanks!

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I wanted to kill the sexiest person alive...But suicide's a crime :-/
:iconmarth2007:
Her face looks odd; the proportions of it are slightly off, especially, the eyes. Her abs look too rough. Instead of drawing them with hard lines, you should use shading to define them.

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k thanks :)

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I wanted to kill the sexiest person alive...But suicide's a crime :-/

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